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I want your opinion.
Did you love the mystery?
Did a character drive you crazy?
Was there a part that made you want to keep reading?
Was there something you didn't like?
Tell me! I'm looking for honest feedback from real readers—not professional reviewers.
You can tell me:
What you loved
What you didn't like
What confused you
What surprised you
What you'd change
Whether you'd keep reading
Your opinion could actually help influence how I write future books.
Parents, Make It a Family Challenge!
Here's a fun idea: Read the 10 chapters with your child.
Then compare your answers.
Who do you trust?
Who do you suspect?
What do you think happened to Daisy?
What do you think will happen next?
And here's the important part:
Let your child have the final word.
Kids can be surprisingly good critics. They know when a story is exciting, when a character feels real, and when something just doesn't make sense. And I'd love to hear what they think.
The Mystery Starts Here
Daisy is a prize cow. And now she's missing.
Lost—or taken?
Who would kidnap a cow?
As Emily starts asking questions, she discovers that Daisy's disappearance is connected to something much bigger.
A mysterious clue.
A stranger.
A dangerous race through the woods.
And secrets that could cost Emily everything.
Daisy's disappearance isn't the end of the mystery. It's the beginning.
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